Revised Revision

I'm glad I chose the piece I did and am very proud of how it turned out. My piece was very easy for me to write because it was such a good experience for me when it happened. It was the story of how I met my best friend so obviously it's something I hold close to my heart. I don't get to see her very often so there weren't many ways to elaborate how much we mean to each other even though we do keep in contact constantly. I think my paper showed very well the close bond we share and explained how it came about. In the end I was very proud of my paper.